With a theme like “Showing Off”, most students will feature their main character bragging and being arrogant, and by the end of the story, this character will learn a lesson. How can your child’s composition be a cut above the rest?
In this composition, Jayden has related the act of “Showing Off” to a modern and relatable context. His character planned to post a video of his stunt online. This is an action that the youth in this generation are all too familiar with. Jayden also related his arrogant character’s downfall to online viewers. This is reminiscent of incidents in real life, with online “trolls” and the relentless comments of viewers causing online personalities to lose their popularity.
Jayden also utilised his writing skills to slow down the scenes in his story. He incorporated a good mixture of thoughts, action-reaction sequences and Show, Not Tell emotions to make his writing captivating.
